Short Stories

[j.d Stottlemire]

I thougtht it might be fun to exchange some short stories.

Here's the first of a four part series I published on alienskinmag.com a few years ago.

Take a peek.

J.D.

Meet my book, "You Me and Apollo: Hope Beyond Bipolar Disorder" at http://www.lulu.com/content/1135715

[AB]

Hi J.D.

Really like it. I will submit the prologue to my first novel here later this afternoon. I really like the idea of a creature being able to get into your dreams and make you do stuff. I like the whole 'evil concealed to tempt people in' kind of idea.

Nice.

[j.d Stottlemire]

Thx. I'll post the other three over the next few days. Number two is called "Deloris' Breakfast."

[AB]

Hi J.D.

A little later than promised but here is the prologue to my fisrt novel. Obviously all content is copyrighted and I would advise everyone to make sure they're covered or understand the general copyright topic. I will post a link in the resources group as soon as possible if anyone wants any more information.

Any comments and advice are very much welcome

cheers

[j.d Stottlemire]

Wow! That opening teases. I like it. My one comment is that there is a lot of info dumping here. Could some of this wait until later in the story.

J.D.

[AB]

Yeah thanks. Think, looking back, that is a very valid comment. I could probably get rid of some of the history in there and filter some of it in later on. Thanks for reading, I might post some more of the book at a later date but not sure were I would stand with publishers etc

[j.d Stottlemire]

Here's the second in the "What Every Happened to Summerville" series.

[Lysmandor]

very nice, simple, frightening. Its in an interesting mix of 'parent hating' and evil creature under the ground.. i liked it.