life

[Jeremy Whitehead]

LIFE

what is life

is it joy

is it sarrow

or

is it love

does it fade

like the mighty rose

does it go out

like the raoring fire

does it change

like the breathing wind

is it bottomless

like the pastionate ocean

is it strong

like the vengeful land

is it misty

like the mysterious twlight

or clear

like the early morning dew

or dark

like the the late evening

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life is all of this but none of this for it just is

[AB]

Hi Jeremy, good stuff. This is a really interesting poem. Is poetry your main area of interest?
On a note to help with spelling, if you use Firefox instead of Internet Explorer it spells checks when you're typing on the web in boxes such as these and lets you right click on any red underlined words to see alternatives. You can get it for free from here http://www.mozilla-europe.org/en/products/firefox/

[Red]

This is an interesting poem, you've obviously put a lot of effort into it. I like the phrases like "vengeful land" and "passionate ocean." Unfortunately though I'm afraid the spelling errors spoil it. It's not the end of the world if you have trouble spelling, just make sure you either check in a dictionary or use a computer spell-check. This will make your work look much better :)